A little depressing but only because it rained on me on Christmas and half my roof came down near my bedroom during the storm here in the South.
I am trapped in my own little cocoon, and have been all my life . It is see-through almost like glass.I look outside of my little glass prison and see dust,or what looks like to be dust ,rubble,perhaps. I look up and see the tree leaves above me fall one by one then faster and faster, then twigs and branches fall down below me. The little cocoon seems to protect me. I look down to see people running and screaming hiding under my tree for shelter, "Do not come under here." I try to say to them, but my words do not meet them and a man is killed. A tear slowly slips from my left eye,if only he could have heard me from my cocoon.The rest of the people below skip the trees seeing as it were dangerous,and head for a small building. Water drops start to fall from the clear blue sky making it dark and eerie. Then frozen water that looks like small blocks even started to hit the building that the people were in. "No" I tried to say but nothing came out. Soon the sky started to shoot out flickers of small,thin light. One of them hit the building, and red flames show up. I start to cry, all the innocent people that will be burned by the flames and that I can do nothing but stay in the cocoon and cry. I might be selfish when I was thinking this but for once I am happy for being trapped in my cocoon
My cocoon is literally my bed....that's what i thought when I read this :P but this was very nice :) and oh my damage from a storm on the house oooh o_e that's tough..
Wow, a powerfully descriptive and dynamic scene you have painted here. You're really good at making the words weave into a tangible world that we can step into and see more directly.
It does suck about the rain and the storm damage, but at least you're okay and that's a good thing I would think. =)
I have been writing random fan-fiction for anime/manga for over a year, I even tried making a few original ones. Now I want to branch out and try new things like poetry and short stories. I enjoy watc.. more..