Vent poetry

Vent poetry

A Poem by Holly

 

 

You said you loved me
And you had to go, I said
I love you and silently said,
"Please no." I then said okay
And goodbye, then that was when
I started to cry. So I hugged my
Teddy bear, pretending it was
You sitting there, my pillow was
Soaked with my tears, crying for
What seemed like years. Rhymes
Were filling my head, and now these
Words I shed. Trying to fill the pain
In my heart, I feel like I'm falling apart.
I keep asking why it has to be so hard,
Why does our love leave me so scarred?
I keep making the same wishes that don't
Come true, all I want is to be with you.
But your too far and I cry more, curled up
On the floor. I know we'll be together, soon
Enough. Because we've made it this far,
Even when times were tough. So I'll vent
It out as much as I can, we've been soul mates
Since time began. I love you, more than anyone
Will ever know. You make time stand still, and all
Is slow.

 

© 2009 Holly


Author's Note

Holly
This is just really vent poetry and not meant to be correct form of it. It just rhymes and is there. Nothing more, I needed to vent and for some reason it all just came out in a rhyme.

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this was a really good vent poem well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was ,like, really great. :) I really hope u feel better soon. All I do now is think about how much your breaking inside. :( How's Hope?

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's great to vent, I have a few poems like that.
Anyway, it was a great read that I can relate too.
Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hi there, I'm Holly. I'm 18 years young. 2.21.09 was the best day ever, it's when a certain girl stole my heart and kept it next to hers. :] I've been in love with Hope since I met her. I never though.. more..

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