Animal Cruelty

Animal Cruelty

A Poem by Holly

Animal Cruelty

You left me there to die,
And I just want to know, why?
Was it because I was a stray?
Or because I was just in the way.

I have to ask, why I was beat.
Was it because I was just on the street?
Does it make you feel better now that I’m gone?
Or did you feel nothing and just move on.

I wont forget what you did to me.
And I hope you remember every plea.
I hope my cries haunt your mind.
I hope you remember the day I went blind.

The day you took my life away,
My body lifeless, my eyes dim and gray.
I just wanted to find someone to love,
But I guess, I’ll just be waiting up above.

© 2009 Holly


Author's Note

Holly
I was asked to write a poem/prayer type thing by a friend on dA. She had found a site on the genocide of animal cruelty and decided to make a site about helping them and what not. So I said I'd help her out and she asked me to write something, so this is what I came up with. If you'd like to see the site of the genocide, just message me. Same thing goes for her site. Enjoy.

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Congrats on your winning poem. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very touching and sad poem. Excellent, visceral concept of animal cruelty. It happens way too often and goes unnoticed. Excellent poem. Thank you for submitting it to my contest. Great work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this made me cry :( as a supporter of the aspca this hit me hard. you did a great job capturing how the animal feels. it would be nice if everyone understood that they have feelings and feel pain just like us. they deserve the best. great job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, with a very deep and powerful message. I loved this poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sad! And actually made me cry!
[okay so i'm a softy for animals.]

I love the rhyming! It gives the words an innocence presence which is perfect for animals!
love love love it!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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