I wonder ...

I wonder, what are people doing at this moment when I'm writing this. What will I be doing while they are reading this.
I wonder where is settled my soulmate.
Is he watching the stars at this very moment like I am?
I wonder how was the universe created.
I wonder how was human being created.
I wonder what are you people feeling in this moment.
I wonder if there is someone who can answer all of my questions.
I wonder if you are wondering the same as I am. Are you?

Reviews

[Tobias Rasmussen]

Well well well. What do we have here? Good poem, nice and juicy to see how you made thoughts about life and philosophy. Definetly an interesting subject to write about. The continued use of the phrase "I wonder" makes the poem have a form. So it annoys me to see that one different line. "Is he watching the stars at this very moment like I am?" If you wanted the flow of "I wonder" then use it there too. It looks a wee bit clustered to me in the way, That the verses are all long and complicated. If you want to keep them as they are then maybe just maybe, you could go about doing it like this.

I wonder,
What are people doing at this moment when I'm writing this.
What will I be doing while they are reading this.

I wonder
Where is settled my soulmate.

I wonder
Is he watching the stars at this very moment like I am?

I wonder
how was the universe created.

I wonder
how was human being created.

I wonder
what are you people feeling in this moment.

I wonder
if there is someone who can answer all of my questions.

I wonder
if you are wondering the same as I am.
Are you?

And then make the layout go in the center. It might be worth fiddling around with.
I can see on your profile that you are from Macedonia.
Your english is quite good, but have some hick ups.
The line "Where is settled my soulmate." would sound more proper if it was "Where did my soulmate settle". If it doesn't affect your rhyming it might be for the better.

But all of that aside. I like it and I am going to put it in my library to read later. Keep up the good work love, I look forward to reading the next one.

[All she wrote]

I really appreciate your advice, and thank you ..I'm not that good in english ,but I'm trying to improve...I'm happy that you like my poem!Have a good day.

[Tobias Rasmussen]

you too :) glad to be of help