Are you the person you want to be?

Don't you think that you have to stop for a moment?Stop where you are and think about everything that happend in your life.
Think about everyone.Think about every little thing and every big thing you did.Think about every success you had,and every fall you had.Think about the people who were with you when you succeed and the ones who were with you when you fell on the cold ground.
And If you think long enough it will pose the next questions to you.
Are you at the place you have to be?Are you with the people you have to be?Are you the person you want to be?

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

Think about everyone.Think about every little thing and every big thing you did.Think about every success you had,and every fall you had.Think about the people who were with you when you succeed and the ones who were with you when you fell on the cold ground.

I think this poem would work and look better with a more structured form other than prose. This is a very thought provoking piece. Thanks for sharing :)

[All she wrote]

I hope you like it!