Good Morning.

Good Morning.

A Poem by Jillian Louise

The sun shone through the room,
In beams of white.
Over our heads the star did loom,
Radiating upon us a bright light.
The feathered cover still over my head,
You are resting beside me.
I roll myself over to your side of the bed,
It is the only place I desire to be.
You stir some and open your eyes,
I watch you wake as I lay against you.
You look over at me with great surprise,
It's almost like smiling is all you can do.
I quietly say, "Hi,"
As you tuck a tendril behind my ear.
In a deep, resonant voice you reply,
With the sweetest words I could ever hear.
You tell me you love me,
And I don't know what to do.
You're everything I wanted you to be,
And suddenly it slips: "I love you, too."

© 2010 Jillian Louise


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Very romantic indeed! Loved this one!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Incredible how you tied together the morning sun, the touch, the smile, the words. To me, it was perfect. Added to favorites. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


such a lovely piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice write. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah such a feeling one can't deny!
nicely penned Jillian, I enjoyed
this very much. Thanx for the
share!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful tender scene filled with captivating imagery.

Posted 14 Years Ago


So sweet! and memorable as well i imagine....

Posted 14 Years Ago



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