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I long to admit to you how I truly feel,

Yet you would not believe such feelings were real.

I have not gotten very far with opposites, 

And I have not been so passionate for as long as this.

The curve of your bow-shaped lips,

I desire only but one long kiss.

I am aware such affection I cannot show,

I know very well that you are the one, though.

You make me glow with the brightest hue,

I can only hope that one day you might love me too.

Alas, such dreams cannot be dreamt,

And I cannot allow such perfection to tempt.

It does not feel wrong and it does not feel bad,

Because I am nothing but in love with you and that is that.

Unfortunately though, there is just one gripe-

One that I have tried to overlook with all of my might.

And that one tiny fact that troubles me is this:

Instead of a mister, you are a miss. 

Reviews

[Bare trees]

Wowie! didn't expect that. I like the fact that you changed the expected to a different conclusion. The rhymes were also unexpected but in a good way. Nice job.

[Mai Aliza]

I like this. I love the last two lines because it was completely unexpectated. A great wow factor. Rhyme scheme was a bit confusing but still enjoyable. Great job!