dreamin'

String me a necklace

of gifts from the sea

a lunar eclipse

of liquid bound’ry

Write all your poems

on the back of your hand

and read them to me

by stardust and sand

Reviews

[SkinlessFrank]

words that capture the elegance and simplicity of love

[luna11]

Brilliant poem :D

[Eabani]

Beautiful.

[Chris]

Lovers sitting on their feet and leaning back in the sand... moonlight and the clouds' shadows flowing past... the softest eyes glowing...and her voice whispering into the sea breeze as I just fall away into the dream...

[Forest Green]

Motion in the slightest swirl of words, like the stirring of clear tidal pools...delightful read...!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Your mind is beautiful... this is so , a word i use too often i know, beautiful.. yet it is just that, beauty within these words. I can picture this in my mind.. the necklace, stardust and sand and the poems being read .You write so well, j ~

Chloe

[Gandré]

it is beautiful Jill. Very soothing and calming and charming.
I am sorry I didnt fnd you earlier. You have been missed!
Write me when you get a chance, much love, my best
lara

[WhiteWillow]

Love short pieces such as this; vivid in detail, not a word wasted. Simply beautiful!

[Mark D]

Perfect

[Ed Hart]

oooooh, you