Misty

In

a

dream

beginning

    to dim

I

could

have

sworn

I

felt

your

    lips

upon

    my skin

Reviews

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

truth be told, I'd trust you to convey an erotic poem, again?

[James Paulin]

Understated, suggestive, stimulating, simplistically imaginative ...potent.

[Bare trees]

The compression of a beautiful thought. There's nothing worse then having to leave a dream world that holds the voice, body and touch of someone we love so dearly. Such a disappointment. This poem on the other hand is anything but. Great job on this.

[Ms.Bri]

..Yes this is amazing. Greatness is within your writing. Your such of good writer that people can read few words and still relate. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Yue Zhang]

I like the simplicity!

[Mary C]

An excellent write, so very artistically expressed

[SkinlessFrank]

that's an effective piece, both in its simplicity and line structure....and yes, it does conjures up those wonderful dreams that we wish not to be awoken from

[Maddie:]]

short, and intrigues me. leaves me wondering! love pieces that do that, leave you wondering, allow you to fill in the blanks! well-written, great job:]

[Robert Haigh]

A terse, tantalizing write. The layout suits the content. Nicely done.