Au Revoir

Where shadows puddle

     grey

in the moon’s cerulean halo

and winter’s frost makes even

        more silent the air

  you will find my frozen tears

buried in the snow

Reviews

[kelvin]

kinda sad yet interesting to know that you're crossing the same path of someone finding their remnants or their DNA so to speak. very strong in having emotions felt in this read here just scratch the surface here and you'll find some of me under here. Yes sad but sadness has as much power in depth feeling as happiness as always keep writing fellow writer

[J]

thank you kindly for your thoughtful comments, kelvin. i will visit your work here shortly :)

[kelvin]

You're welcome

[Ken Simm.]

A beautiful deceptively simple plea for love.

[J]

[smiles] thank you for reading and your thoughtful comment, ken

[Dean]

Beautiful stuff from a beautiful lady.

[J]

you are so kind~ thank you muchly, dean! happy new year!

[SkinlessFrank]

i hope they are sleeping

[Wolfwind]

Even as time is crystallized and the ever flowing wind is chill, remember there are memory sparks, that can bring back springs thrill. While tears may have fallen, left to hide beneath the snow, there is always a happier moment, in the mind that you show. :)

Beautifully sad and mournful dirge of poem Lady J. =) You're gift for conjuring powerful emotions in such a small foot print of ink has always been one of my greatest enjoyments in reading your words.

Fantastic Ink!
Aaron :)

[J]

thank you muchly, dear aaron. your uplifting comments always bring warmest smiles. :)

[Wolfwind]

You're very welcome Lady J! =)

[Ed Hart]

ah, revoirs served with crunchsmathers...my favorite

[emmajoy]

Only you could write such a beautiful tho sad story in a few words, dear friend.

[J]

thank you, ever-gracious friend! x

[emmajoy]

(Jill)

[Frieda P]

Simply understated elegance. Like this a lot.

[J]

you are so kind! thank you, frieda!

[Relic]

Geeze that is great. Excellent J.

[J]

aww thank you, t. n.o.w. i'll go find my jammies! x

[Relic]

haha, sounds good. ;)