Pandemonium - Senryu

I don't think this needs a description

Ragged hearts hidden

Within caves of wondrous calm-

Pandemonium

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love the paradox here, and such a well done piece. This would be identified as Senryu (same form as Haiku but not strictly about nature)---
j.

[Isimbabi]

Ah, thank you j. I'll definitely be changing swapping out the 'haiku' with 'senryu'. Thanks for the review.

[KeiLynn]

....waiting to erupt.

That's what I think of after the word Pandemonium. Also the start of a great drama.

[Isimbabi]

Haha. True!! I guess it'll make the core for a great drama.... And yes, waiting to erupt is actually the concise explanation of this piece. Thanks for reading

[Haley]

This is fantastic, great job!

[Isimbabi]

Thank you, Haley. I really appreciate!!