She

It's about her. Who ever she is.

She is beautiful
She smiles
She's got love in
Her eyes
She's classy
She's kind
She's a friend
She's mine


Her heart
Deep and warm
Her honesty,
Unquestioned.
She's lovely,
To you and I
Regardless of,
Who she loves.


She's a queen
She is love
She is beauty
She's a gem
She's mine,
The only one of all.

Author's Note

Opinions please.

Reviews

[Phillip Francis]

I like the direction that this is going. You describe "She" beautifully, but part of my would like for you to continue, being descriptive of what "She" may look like. I think a fourth stanza similar to your second would benefit this piece.

Just a thought.

[Isimbabi]

Thanks. I'll add another.

[CarlyFlower]

I imagined her with poise. I think when I fall this is the person I try to bring myself back up to be.

[Isimbabi]

We all do try, I hope you succeed.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[AndresLicea]

I love the way its formatted. Your style in this poem is very creative and descriptive. It makes me want to know about who "she" is.

[Isimbabi]

I'm happy you like it. Don't stop reading.