What You've Given?

I love you all the time,

but what i given..,

more than a millions of harsh words..

I missed you everytime,

but what i've done,

more than i desired the silence...

I always care for you,

but what else i did,

more than i pretended like, not loving you...

 

I'm possessive about you,

but what i did,

more than i left you, in this crazy world..

Above the all, i never let you

to live in my terms

i just kept them inside...

It's my guilty to think,

you might understand me...

But what i got from you???

All the pain you given..,

where should i put it...

is there any AnGeL to weigh out that???

Author's Note

Sometimes, we doesn't need any Special Reason to write something, everything will got from the flow of mind to the words. And also, for a writer, feelings are necessary to write down something. For me it's not a feeling only......

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

There are Angels out there. Also devils and demons too. Love takes time. Need long walks and real understanding of two people goals. You can't give up. Be a friend first and allow life to show you the right way. A powerful poem that open the doors to many questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[unknown]

True indeed, I however can only write when a message is sparking in my mind.

[brenda]

wow yeah i have been there but nice poem !:)

[Sakib]

Nicely written and exquisitely expressed. You have shown frustration through your poem that many people have felt. Great job.