What You've Given?

I love you all the time,

but what i given..,

more than a millions of harsh words..

I missed you everytime,

but what i've done,

more than i desired the silence...

I always care for you,

but what else i did,

more than i pretended like, not loving you...

 

I'm possessive about you,

but what i did,

more than i left you, in this crazy world..

Above the all, i never let you

to live in my terms

i just kept them inside...

It's my guilty to think,

you might understand me...

But what i got from you???

All the pain you given..,

where should i put it...

is there any AnGeL to weigh out that???

Author's Note

Sometimes, we doesn't need any Special Reason to write something, everything will got from the flow of mind to the words. And also, for a writer, feelings are necessary to write down something. For me it's not a feeling only......

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

There are Angels out there. Also devils and demons too. Love takes time. Need long walks and real understanding of two people goals. You can't give up. Be a friend first and allow life to show you the right way. A powerful poem that open the doors to many questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[freelancejouster]

i'm not such a fan of all the ellipses, i find that they detract. try to find more powerful ways to go about ending lines and ideas. the message behind this poem deserves more, i think.

[mi-chan]

i feel like it would be a really epic and powerful poem, like it would be very different from the ones i read and hear everyday, but your words seem a bit jumbled to me. I don't really care about grammatical errors or a few mis-spellings, but I can't understand anything in your poem really because the lines don't make sense and are difficult to read. That's why I feel like it WOULD be a great poem. It has lots of potential and a great atmosphere going on around it, but I don't understand anything besides it's about a bad relationship and seeking love.

[Sbernie18]

very deep and powerful. good write

[tyLLanI]

heart felt emotions here.

[EMF]

Powerful poem. Passionate and strong. Very painful and intense. Cracking poem

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I agree with Lily Mae, that last stanza tore at my heart strings......beautifully expressed emotion.

[Lively]

Very well written...

[Olivia Petchonka's thou..]

Beautiful poem! The words flowed in a magnificent way and expressed true feelings. Great job!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Beautiful!

[Lily Mae]

"All the pain you given..,
where should i put it...
is there any AnGeL to weigh out that???"

This went straight to my heart.. I wish I knew the answer to that question... Excellent write..x