The day i came alive....

When I met you at first time it’s all a dark night,

In front of that church, you were talking to somebody.,

Through the damn blue lights., I saw that fascinating eyes...

But, those were searching for somebody else…

 

I don’t know why the hell am standing there as nothing.

Don’t know what to do, or even don’t know what to think..,

Losing myself, searching for the reasons inside my head..,

Did you ripped out my heart and soul…?

        

                                                                         

Author's Note

Nothing to write, this was really happened in my life, and here i share it for a while.

Reviews

[angelina]

experience....

[David Winters]

interesting poem

[MoriartyMesa]

Very Cream and Very Jack Bruce. It has that stone of British Rock with a bit of sadness and truth.

[Kayla K]

You captured a moment and created it into something great.

[brenda]

wow truly amazing poet you capture the feelings in it just right keep writing!:)

[unknown]

Very nice, sometimes people can't see what's in front of them. Hopefully she didn't rip your soul or heart, but only didn't see what was in front of her because she was blinded by someone else. Nice poem and thanks for sharing something personal!

[Kyrin Grey]

It is so utterly raw, so alive and powerful. I'm not sure if angry is the right way to phrase that, but I know how it feels . . . Great work, keep it up!

[Lily Mae]

Intense and raw write..you penned your emotions very well with this..great write..xx

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

very interesting and you know its something that has hapen to you, makes me sad. its a very saddening poem.but writen real well. I give oyu props and i hope you have come to terms with this incedent, it hurts to hold on to pain, we ust all move on to live our lives properly