Light Splashes

Dec 24, '10 10:14 AM for jibey's contacts

Light splashes on the cold white snow
It is your radiance
The light and warmth you bring
Making the cold sparkle and melt

Reviews

[Alicante lullaby]

i'm sure jibey's contacts want to say the same for him...

[Luxovious Sloane]

Interesting... I like it.

[Ruth]

Interesting turn, the snow reflecting the radiance of someone, the purity, the emotion, the sparkle and the melt are lush!
xx

[Moflo]

This was really good. So short and simple that it really draws attention to its power. I like it a lot. Great job.

[KellieJeanne]

So short yet so captivating,
made my heart melt

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Simple and Sweet..!!!

[shythatway]

*just smiles*

[Liza]

awww what a romantic & warm reflection

[EmpressPoetess]

Breathtaking imagery you've painted, and such tenderness as well.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful little verse~ warms the composite whole of being~