Risking the roughness

Thoughts on a push-bike

Peddling along the winding lane

Scent of wild garlic in the air
Warm sun high in the sky
Shudders and bumps rough on the way

I feel you behind me
Pressed on my skin-bare back
Legs spread both sides of me
Hands grabbing flat on my belly

As I struggle to balance
Will my strength be enough?
Will you hang on as I swerve? 

I peddle and peddle
Hoping to get there
Rough though the way
And the feel of your thighs.

Garlic drugs my senses
Warm air streams on my face
You hold me tight
We keep on going
Risking the roughness.

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Shat your classmates are doing ? See whay. Ypu are doing pokimg yoit dick..

Ehat that sastri friends are dpimg ? Family with kids this b***h sastri is poking rod intk her a*s
Bistvsantha sastrj sister family are doing? With grand sons daughtets but this lady tok pomimg tod into her a*s by imvokimg portry ..
Gt
Reat team you mafe and f*****g whole family into a suffering...

B*****d..

[JessyJacob]

In north phoolan devi reformed herself to bandit queen.
In south you see naxalites are born

In east jihadis
In west dare to wage war.

Whole 4 corners merge to become your focal poimt to show you what i am made by you for your own desire...

Jessy jacob.
Bhzdrakali

Bhadra and kali to take life of evil.

[SJ Mullins]

Love this, M! Subtle but gets the point across! I have been away a long, long time. I’ve changed a lot hopefully for the better!

[Jen]

hey doofey. I miss you. lets talk. email me? [email protected]

[Jen]

really? talk to me about this

[Papaya]

Sometimes the bumpy rides are worth it. 🙂

[Jibey]

This was written on an impulse and is as rough as the ride... I appreciate your generosity... still holding on

[JessyJacob]

what you need you know bettet, but do remember people sacrificed their life for you.

What is that life where you say you are dying every second, when other person is taking advantage of you. Why dont you encounter it one time then see how thst lady takes advantage of you??
Usha/jessy jacob.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.

[JessyJacob]

I sing this song for you.

https://youtu.be/xQauklmE3Y8?si=9w01hUgAUgbJjgfq

As you asked
Will my strength strong enough??
Strength comes from inner confidence
Yes you do have

Will you hang on as i swerve?
Yes i hang on to you.

Jessy jacob.
With love,
I really liked the lines of bike riding.

Hope you understand the lyrics in song .
I will explain you each word.