All My Loving

All My Loving

 

Tomorrow, today

I write poem for you every day,

Writing lovely words just for you,

For you are my inspiration,

My inspiration that taught me,

Taught me what is like being in love

 

Writing poems for you is lovely,

Lovely for it makes me feel in love with you,

It’s like writing love letters for you,

Love letters that cannot be sent to you,

But I still write and hope,

Hope that all my dreams will come true

 

Dreaming of you always,

Dreaming that I could kiss those lips,

Lips that I’m missing,

Missing to see smile,

Smile that could completes my day,

My day that I want to spend only with you

 

Thinking of you in every way,

Kissing you in every dream I am dreaming,

Loving you every day,

Every day that I wish I could be with you,

Wish I could show that I love you so much,

Love you so much that I will give all my loving to you.

...................

Jas A. Ramos

Arayat,Pampanga,Philippines

[email protected]

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

I beleive to be without someone you have such feelings for is a legit form of torture. What a sweet poem to someone obviously loved, writen with honest words born from the deepest dwellings of the heart. Great job, you're now going to have every female on here wanting a poem of their own!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. Nice flow of thoughts and I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Andrew Wright]

Limerence - How beautiful and powerful it is. This is ridiculously honest, and I applaud you for every line.

[Just Plain Me]

This is sweet :) It's best to have someone you can write loving poems about...and not so evil poems. lol

[Voice11]

I really love the sweetness of this poem. There are only a few typos though.
the second line I think is meant to be "I write 'poems'" or "I write 'a' poem"

Great work other than that I really like this poem

[MichaelsLyric.com]

Being in love with love is the basis for every romantic. Hope for love is probably the strongest motivators and ignites the greatest passions within us. Very nice piece. Thank you for writing.

[Amy]

beautiful

[Dalebear]

Wow this is speechless poem and your poetic skills is of the rails well down

Dalebear

[Omar Fendri]

lot of passion and adulation... pure simple words translate the very sweet loving-emotion of you... Some lines are so romantic. it is enjoyable to read

[cassandra violet]

Thanks for submitting this to my contest! This is a very passionate love poem.