Alright With Me

Alright With Me

I’m like a child without a clue

Clueless of what you did to me

Like a thief in the night

That has stolen my heart

And I can’t control my eyes around you

 

It feels like war when I look at you

But it feels like heaven when you look at me

I say to start but you start to go

Now I’m on a run chasing you

 

I say you put your best foot forward

‘Cause here I am now

Running for your love,

Love that keeps my heart beating fast

 

Will you believe in what I said

Come next to me so that you can feel,

Feel that I’m falling for you

But will not fall on the floor

And will keep knocking on your door

‘Til you open your heart to me.

Reviews

[ForTheWorld]

Feel that I’m falling for you

But will not fall on the floor...i love this two line LOL...can't laughing with this lines, but actually or i should say honestly, this two line intrigue my heart for something i don't know..nice poem, one that could deeply touch its readers heart..

[Nobody.]

ah, the longing....expressed well. very touching piece.
cheers!

[.]

Enjoyable read, liked it

[Dark Empress]

The expression of love, it's beautiful. I really enjoyed this. Amazing piece. :)

[Ruth]

Poignantly expressed love, utter turmoil of the heart! Love is as much a blessings as a curse! lol
Great work love!
xx

[Tomi]

I read every word of this, and I really liked it. Thank you.

[The Doctor]

yes...it does feel that way. our job is to live with it or confront it my friend/

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Aye me...

[Brad]

sigh...yeah, it's like that

[Aven]

hm this reminded me of a song by john mayer called assassin... a good read :)