Alright With Me

Alright With Me

I’m like a child without a clue

Clueless of what you did to me

Like a thief in the night

That has stolen my heart

And I can’t control my eyes around you

 

It feels like war when I look at you

But it feels like heaven when you look at me

I say to start but you start to go

Now I’m on a run chasing you

 

I say you put your best foot forward

‘Cause here I am now

Running for your love,

Love that keeps my heart beating fast

 

Will you believe in what I said

Come next to me so that you can feel,

Feel that I’m falling for you

But will not fall on the floor

And will keep knocking on your door

‘Til you open your heart to me.

Reviews

[ForTheWorld]

Feel that I’m falling for you

But will not fall on the floor...i love this two line LOL...can't laughing with this lines, but actually or i should say honestly, this two line intrigue my heart for something i don't know..nice poem, one that could deeply touch its readers heart..

[Just Plain Me]

This is beautiful...I love it :) It makes me smile, but it also makes me remember all the times I loved a boy, and he didn't know I existed. It's amazing, that you can make someone smile and think of that at the same time. I love it :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a good poem. It was so emotional, but it was very good. I loved the emotions and imagery within the piece. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

[Nothing Personal]

"It feels like war when I look at you
But it feels like heaven when you look at me"

brilliant..i loved this one..great job..keep going.

[Voice11]

I think this is a really nice piece. I can just see the person who got hurt still pining for that one who is familiar. Good Job!

[Dalebear]

Your writing skills are out of this world.... truly it spectacular..... Good write

Dalebear

[Sincerely, Caitlyn;]

Again, I am jealous of your skills. Thanks for sharing it with me. (:

[Angela Mulley]

This is great! well done!

[Christopher.Holmberg]

quite nice. 10//10

[Erin]

Are you sure that it's "Alright" and not "All right"?
But in any event........
Wow. Good job. The message is deep and impactful. The tone and word choice are incredible. Great job, my friend.
PBP