Just My Heart

I am a big boy in a big world,

A big world that has changes,

Changes that I have to blend in,

Like feelings that twist

 

Simple feelings to confusing feelings,

Confusing feelings that make me think,

Thinking that made me more confused,

Confused this innocent heart of mine

 

Never felt this way before,

Happiness that I felt when I’m with her

I care for her and I make her feel it

Feel what I’m really feeling for her

 

I just let my heart decide,

Decide of what I’m really feeling for her,

Didn’t used logic or any calculations,

Just my heart.

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Awards

First Place: Excellent

Oct 4, 2010

• October Love & Darkness rises
• Just My Heart

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Just a lovely heartfelt poem Jhas, when you are leading with your heart there is no wrong turn...ever, it seems to have its own wisdom.
Take care with your grammar, use the spell checker in word, that should help.
I loved this piece for its simplicity and promise :-)
Cheers~
Helen~

[Brad]

sometimes that heart gets one in trouble...but it's always better to follow it

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Very nice and truthful. You should always let your heart decide. Especially in such matters. Thinking too much is far from good. Far from good..

[Melody-Rose;]

I really liked this poem, you're a great writer. Keep writing :)

[Allan Eddings]

Maybe its the mood I am in, but I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. My favorite of yours, thank you so much for sharing!

A.E.