Just My Heart

I am a big boy in a big world,

A big world that has changes,

Changes that I have to blend in,

Like feelings that twist

 

Simple feelings to confusing feelings,

Confusing feelings that make me think,

Thinking that made me more confused,

Confused this innocent heart of mine

 

Never felt this way before,

Happiness that I felt when I’m with her

I care for her and I make her feel it

Feel what I’m really feeling for her

 

I just let my heart decide,

Decide of what I’m really feeling for her,

Didn’t used logic or any calculations,

Just my heart.

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Awards

First Place: Excellent

Oct 4, 2010

• October Love & Darkness rises
• Just My Heart

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Just a lovely heartfelt poem Jhas, when you are leading with your heart there is no wrong turn...ever, it seems to have its own wisdom.
Take care with your grammar, use the spell checker in word, that should help.
I loved this piece for its simplicity and promise :-)
Cheers~
Helen~

[Lawrence Taylor]

Beautifully done though the last line in the first stanza and the second line of the last stanza don't make grammatical sense. A little bit of a word change might clear up some grammar confusion that might take away from the overall picture. Don't take this harshly it's only meant to be constructive.

[Andrew Wright]

What a refreshing read in a dry spell of creativity, thank you for the privilege of allowing me to read it by posting this.

[Lilly]

Nice poem here. Confusion comes so often hand in hand with love...

[the in between]

awww thats a special gift to be able to convey your feelings to this girl you love. You can't balance love with pros and cons.. excellent poem it was moving and sincerely sweet from maybe a first love :)

[Shiela]

i love this.good job.

[Wanderlust]

Confusion seems to be a major theme here, but understandably - I've often thought myself into confusion about the world. It is refreshing to feel as purely, without the confusion, about another, to free yourself from that perplexity - nicely done.

[Jazique]

How nice to be confused in a new word but not to much with a friend by your side.

[Bee]

Oh, heart. Sometimes it contradicts with the proper.. Sometimes it just feels better if you don't care about anything else as long as you feel contented with what you're heart brings...
Very nice poem. I like it a lot.

[Ruth]

Sometimes tis better to be led by the heart and not mind lol
Beautifully said love!
Awesome work
xx

[Matthews Reggie]

thought provoking piece... well written... thanks for sharing...