Thinking Of You

Lying in my bed,

Hugging tightly my pillow,

Pillow that I wish was you

Can’t stop thinking of you

You made me crazier for you

 

Sitting in the couch while watching TV,

Watching your favorite show,

Thinking that it is you I’m watching at,

Watching you doing your thing,

Thing that I love most in you, you make me happy

 

Standing while looking at our picture,

Picture that I framed,

Framed with love of you,

Love of you that made me thinking of you,

Thinking of you always.

Reviews

[trishalvarma]

Hey, returning the favor =D

I love "pillow that I wish was you", I believe many people can find themselves in a position where they miss someone a lot.

"Standing while looking at your picture" should be changed to: standing while looking at our picture. ~ That way it will give a thought to the reader that both subject were together. Also it depicts the scenario that the subject is standing at and art gallery looking at the picture.

[Robin]

an emotive expression of thinking of someone ~ nice flow

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

speechless...

[Angel Bird]

What a beautiful and intense declaration of deep love. Nonetheless I feel some kind of fear and/or doubt in your words. Love and doubt don't they always go hand in hand anyway?
Wonderfully done.

[Matthews Reggie]

sweet, tender, lovely poem... but hidden in the lines, i found a longing for something... i dont know whether i am right..