Thinking Of You

Lying in my bed,

Hugging tightly my pillow,

Pillow that I wish was you

Can’t stop thinking of you

You made me crazier for you

 

Sitting in the couch while watching TV,

Watching your favorite show,

Thinking that it is you I’m watching at,

Watching you doing your thing,

Thing that I love most in you, you make me happy

 

Standing while looking at our picture,

Picture that I framed,

Framed with love of you,

Love of you that made me thinking of you,

Thinking of you always.

Reviews

[trishalvarma]

Hey, returning the favor =D

I love "pillow that I wish was you", I believe many people can find themselves in a position where they miss someone a lot.

"Standing while looking at your picture" should be changed to: standing while looking at our picture. ~ That way it will give a thought to the reader that both subject were together. Also it depicts the scenario that the subject is standing at and art gallery looking at the picture.

[Yana]

Yet this can become even more better, I think this poem was very nice and to the point, I really like it! Great job.(:

[The Cute 1]

good job

[JelliFyshKissUs]

A hole that no tangible item can fill. So heartfelt and sweet.

[Jess Quna]

I've caught myself more than once with the fact that I found a way
to be reminded of the person I love with everything I do...
It gets nervewrecking after a while
when you aren't able to see him...
It's a poem where I easily can relate to,
good job
Greetings

Sarah

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we are reminded of people we love in so many things that we don't notice until they are no long around..well done

[Vivek Koshy]

emotion and want...............mix it and get this poem.
breezy read.....soft.

[Dream Weaver]

A very emotional piece of writing.
I can feel my heart strings being tugged.
Nicely done.

[Omar Fendri]

that overwhelming emotions of adoration, sadness and yearning are so real, so heartfelt, so authentic and pure... beautifully written and i adulate it :) Keep it up

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

emotionally expressive~ sincere and heartfelt~

[SparrowPoet]

very powerful, very sad! :( writing poetry is cathartic. I use it to air my demons, or try demons on various personas of my creation! i can see that poetry is a big part of your life, as it is of mine, and i love to encounter people who write such genuine, heartfelt pieces that are much more than just pretty words arranged nicely on the page. nice work, keep it up :)