Thinking Of You

Lying in my bed,

Hugging tightly my pillow,

Pillow that I wish was you

Can’t stop thinking of you

You made me crazier for you

 

Sitting in the couch while watching TV,

Watching your favorite show,

Thinking that it is you I’m watching at,

Watching you doing your thing,

Thing that I love most in you, you make me happy

 

Standing while looking at our picture,

Picture that I framed,

Framed with love of you,

Love of you that made me thinking of you,

Thinking of you always.

Reviews

[trishalvarma]

Hey, returning the favor =D

I love "pillow that I wish was you", I believe many people can find themselves in a position where they miss someone a lot.

"Standing while looking at your picture" should be changed to: standing while looking at our picture. ~ That way it will give a thought to the reader that both subject were together. Also it depicts the scenario that the subject is standing at and art gallery looking at the picture.

[bbb]

I love your use of repition.
Very well put together, it was easy to get a good image of what was going on.

[Amy]

very nice I enjoyed reading this

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I remember that feeling. It's both wonderful and horrific

[.quan.011.]

Nice peom

[Thecreekdontrise]

:]
love
never disappoints

[Cherrie Palmer]

very good job love hope and longing

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you for all the reviews:)

[Boantlers]

I think it's just perfect. Never be afraid to express what fruits from your feelings, just place hope rather than expectation in them and see how far they bloom.

Nice write.

[David W Moore III]

Nice poem, I've got one entitled the same (actually mine is technically a song) but the sentiments are the same. And in response to Matthew below, it did become kind of osbsessive after she left...

[Akshat♥]

This poem is amazing.love can do anything.i think if both side believe each other...thinks can be better...nicely written:)