Thinking Of You

Lying in my bed,

Hugging tightly my pillow,

Pillow that I wish was you

Can’t stop thinking of you

You made me crazier for you

 

Sitting in the couch while watching TV,

Watching your favorite show,

Thinking that it is you I’m watching at,

Watching you doing your thing,

Thing that I love most in you, you make me happy

 

Standing while looking at our picture,

Picture that I framed,

Framed with love of you,

Love of you that made me thinking of you,

Thinking of you always.

Reviews

[trishalvarma]

Hey, returning the favor =D

I love "pillow that I wish was you", I believe many people can find themselves in a position where they miss someone a lot.

"Standing while looking at your picture" should be changed to: standing while looking at our picture. ~ That way it will give a thought to the reader that both subject were together. Also it depicts the scenario that the subject is standing at and art gallery looking at the picture.

[Alicia™]

I can definitely imagine the picture here… good job.

[Ashesh]

full of love.. loved it. desperation and ache so beautifully transpired into a poem.

[Dalebear]

I love this poem written beautifully

[Christopher.Holmberg]

I love "pillow that I wish was you", I believe many people can find themselves in a position where they miss someone a lot.


indeed, indeed.

[Voice11]

I like it. The poem seems real, and it probably is. I just had a little bit of a hard time feeling the words with a bit of grammar issues but all in all I like it.

[Dark Empress]

Aw, that's sad and kinda sweet to. I've been in this position before. Great write

[Aven]

this is a really softspoken and sweet love-poem, and the format only adds to that. well done!

[Emotionally Blank yet F..]

I really like this... i think the awkward positioning of the words really emphasizes the fact that its a thought process and our thoughts often overlap. Greatly written

[Bright Eyes]

I love the writing in this. Spectacular. :)

[Abbie]

awwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet