Because Of You

You’re the only one who keeps me standing here,

Waiting and keep on holding on,

Holding on for what I know is impossible

‘Cause you’re the thing that I can’t get rid off in my life

A life that is meaningful because of you

 

And every night when the cold wind blows,

I always do the same thing,

The thing that you taught me,

Taught me how to love,

Love that will keep the night warm

 

Whenever I see the clock ticking,

I remember the times we shared together,

Times that you made moments of my life,

Moments that I will never forget,

Unforgettable moments with you

 

I will climb the highest mountains

To see the most beautiful scenery,

A beautiful scenery that will make me believe,

Believe that you will be in my life forever,

Forever like a love that is true, because of you.

.....................................

Jas A. Ramos

Arayat,Pampanga,Philippines

[email protected]

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Awards

Best Written

Oct 4, 2010

• October Love & Darkness rises
• Because Of You

Honorable Mention*

Oct 4, 2010

• He Said /She Said
• Because Of You

3rd Winner

Oct 8, 2010

• Group Contest
• Because Of You

Love is real

Oct 22, 2010

• Love Games
• Because Of You

happiest

Nov 28, 2010

• Light or Darkness
• Because Of You

2nd Prize Purgatory

Dec 13, 2010

• The Reviewer's No Forced Rhymes Poetry Contest
• Because Of You

1st

Jan 13, 2011

• Best of 2010
• Because Of You

Second Runner-Up

Jan 15, 2011

• Best of 2010!
• Because Of You

3rd place

Feb 5, 2011

• The Amazing 3 day contest
• Because Of You

lovely!

Feb 15, 2011

• Unconditionally, irrevocably, and unaturally, in love
• Because Of You

So Cool:-)

Feb 22, 2011

• Random Writing:)
• Because Of You

654

Feb 23, 2011

• Love
• Because Of You

Congratulations!! You were pretty up there!!

Mar 2, 2011

• Poem of You
• Because Of You

Third Place

Jun 10, 2011

• Best Piece of Writing
• Because Of You

Average

May 8, 2012

• Wow Writing
• Because Of You

Great!

May 14, 2012

• Someone Who Inspires You
• Because Of You

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Looking for some positive writes to start the week and this was brilliant.. filled with hope in the one who keeps you grounded and filled with the beauty of life. I have such a person in my life... gives me that sense of the impossible coming true. Excellent write.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you so much...glad to inspire you :)

[Jonathan De Elvira]

WHAT A GOOD WRITE....for someone who just met someone he/she love....
....but as for love...? I won't say a thing about it because reality is not fantasy..

still...good way of writing, you had your own style....keep that style of yours...that's your identity...

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Very loving poem. Most love poems I read on here are depressing but this isn't.

[Cherrie Palmer]

wonderful, heart-felt, the closing was very sweet

[Aven]

It is a different flow from what I normally read, so I struggled with that, but really great writing. I love how it looks and reads good at the same time!

[Dream Weaver]

Heartfelt and realistic...nice work...

[Lilly]

A very sweet poem - shows clearly how significant this person is to you

[Closedown]

Oh, it's so sweet! Very nicely done!