Because Of You

You’re the only one who keeps me standing here,

Waiting and keep on holding on,

Holding on for what I know is impossible

‘Cause you’re the thing that I can’t get rid off in my life

A life that is meaningful because of you

 

And every night when the cold wind blows,

I always do the same thing,

The thing that you taught me,

Taught me how to love,

Love that will keep the night warm

 

Whenever I see the clock ticking,

I remember the times we shared together,

Times that you made moments of my life,

Moments that I will never forget,

Unforgettable moments with you

 

I will climb the highest mountains

To see the most beautiful scenery,

A beautiful scenery that will make me believe,

Believe that you will be in my life forever,

Forever like a love that is true, because of you.

.....................................

Jas A. Ramos

Arayat,Pampanga,Philippines

[email protected]

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Awards

Best Written

Oct 4, 2010

• October Love & Darkness rises
• Because Of You

Honorable Mention*

Oct 4, 2010

• He Said /She Said
• Because Of You

3rd Winner

Oct 8, 2010

• Group Contest
• Because Of You

Love is real

Oct 22, 2010

• Love Games
• Because Of You

happiest

Nov 28, 2010

• Light or Darkness
• Because Of You

2nd Prize Purgatory

Dec 13, 2010

• The Reviewer's No Forced Rhymes Poetry Contest
• Because Of You

1st

Jan 13, 2011

• Best of 2010
• Because Of You

Second Runner-Up

Jan 15, 2011

• Best of 2010!
• Because Of You

3rd place

Feb 5, 2011

• The Amazing 3 day contest
• Because Of You

lovely!

Feb 15, 2011

• Unconditionally, irrevocably, and unaturally, in love
• Because Of You

So Cool:-)

Feb 22, 2011

• Random Writing:)
• Because Of You

654

Feb 23, 2011

• Love
• Because Of You

Congratulations!! You were pretty up there!!

Mar 2, 2011

• Poem of You
• Because Of You

Third Place

Jun 10, 2011

• Best Piece of Writing
• Because Of You

Average

May 8, 2012

• Wow Writing
• Because Of You

Great!

May 14, 2012

• Someone Who Inspires You
• Because Of You

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Looking for some positive writes to start the week and this was brilliant.. filled with hope in the one who keeps you grounded and filled with the beauty of life. I have such a person in my life... gives me that sense of the impossible coming true. Excellent write.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you so much...glad to inspire you :)

[Crinkle°]

the repetition creates a flow very interesting. A very sweet poem.

[hannah]

The title honestly made me curious about the poem. That and your read request. :D It's a sweet poem that evokes innocence of one experiencing first love or rather, has found a stable relationship. Not a traditional poem, but I think that wasn't your original intention in the first place.

[deeps]

This is such a lovely write. I like this I thought it was sweet.

[luciddreamer]

Whenever I see the clock ticking, I remember the times we shared together.....I have been here many times in the last few years.....good work...
Peace
Robin

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sincere heartfelt moving and expressive poem~

[Trevor]

Do you have someone in mind when you write these? It definitely sounds like it

[Amy]

WOW OK this is beautiful and so sweet
I can't say much other then I love this poem
great write

[Omar Fendri]

as always, you're spinning in the field of purity and perfection, the field of the authentic Love where the adoration becomes so true, so pure and harmonious.
Specific words you put it there together to create another breathtaking poem :)
nice work

[Miss Coral]

This was really sweet, but the repetition bothered me to be perfectly honest- I felt like it detracted from the piece. It made it seem a little bit overdone, and didn't add much. Other than that though, I loved this. Nice write. :)

-Coral-

[Broken Girl]

Haha, like Walter said, most poems on here ARE depressing! (Just read mine). LOL
This is super sweet! (: I like it!