Because Of You

You’re the only one who keeps me standing here,

Waiting and keep on holding on,

Holding on for what I know is impossible

‘Cause you’re the thing that I can’t get rid off in my life

A life that is meaningful because of you

 

And every night when the cold wind blows,

I always do the same thing,

The thing that you taught me,

Taught me how to love,

Love that will keep the night warm

 

Whenever I see the clock ticking,

I remember the times we shared together,

Times that you made moments of my life,

Moments that I will never forget,

Unforgettable moments with you

 

I will climb the highest mountains

To see the most beautiful scenery,

A beautiful scenery that will make me believe,

Believe that you will be in my life forever,

Forever like a love that is true, because of you.

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Jas A. Ramos

Arayat,Pampanga,Philippines

[email protected]

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Awards

Best Written

Oct 4, 2010

• October Love & Darkness rises
• Because Of You

Honorable Mention*

Oct 4, 2010

• He Said /She Said
• Because Of You

3rd Winner

Oct 8, 2010

• Group Contest
• Because Of You

Love is real

Oct 22, 2010

• Love Games
• Because Of You

happiest

Nov 28, 2010

• Light or Darkness
• Because Of You

2nd Prize Purgatory

Dec 13, 2010

• The Reviewer's No Forced Rhymes Poetry Contest
• Because Of You

1st

Jan 13, 2011

• Best of 2010
• Because Of You

Second Runner-Up

Jan 15, 2011

• Best of 2010!
• Because Of You

3rd place

Feb 5, 2011

• The Amazing 3 day contest
• Because Of You

lovely!

Feb 15, 2011

• Unconditionally, irrevocably, and unaturally, in love
• Because Of You

So Cool:-)

Feb 22, 2011

• Random Writing:)
• Because Of You

654

Feb 23, 2011

• Love
• Because Of You

Congratulations!! You were pretty up there!!

Mar 2, 2011

• Poem of You
• Because Of You

Third Place

Jun 10, 2011

• Best Piece of Writing
• Because Of You

Average

May 8, 2012

• Wow Writing
• Because Of You

Great!

May 14, 2012

• Someone Who Inspires You
• Because Of You

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Looking for some positive writes to start the week and this was brilliant.. filled with hope in the one who keeps you grounded and filled with the beauty of life. I have such a person in my life... gives me that sense of the impossible coming true. Excellent write.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you so much...glad to inspire you :)

[Forever Mine]

Dang, this is what i needed to bring up my mood. This was very positive and after being sick all week, defiently brightened up my day. This was very good work.

[JENY]

Very beautiful….
One of the best love poems…I read this week….
Loved it so much…

[Voice]

Very beautiful!! :)

Voice

[Danny K]

Nice poem

[qaralynn]

oehh cute poem..

[*Evelen*]

Aww.. i love this poem! It seems like something i would say to someone well done.

[Angel Bird]

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Believe that you will be in my life forever,
Forever like a love that is true, because of you.
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This is heart-warming beautiful. Awesome poem.

[Lawrence Taylor]

Your artisty with this particular piece really comes through in how you've made each line flow into the idea of the next line. The entire poem could almost be read as one sentence and yet each line, as well as each stanza, has it's own personal idea.

[Citizen Erased]

This is lovely. Well done.

[Brad]

somebody is in love...hahahah...beaut of a dedication