You're My Saving Grace

You're like an angel,
An angel that has been sent from above,
That has sent for me to guide me,
Guide and care for me through all my life

You're the missing piece in every puzzle,
The missing piece in my heart,
The missing piece that I will always keep searching for,
For you are a part of my life that can't live without with

You're the mystery in every case,
A great mystery of why I love you so,
A great mystery that unveils the truth,
The truth that you're my saving grace.

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Awards

The Cherub Angel

Sept. 18, 2010

• Angels
• You're My Saving Grace

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

*been* sent from above
The repetition segway from one line to another can be used for emphasis quite well, but when you use it in an entire poem, it makes the entire piece feel repetitive. What you have written here is very nice, but it's overshadowed by that repetition- it dominates the piece, and feels like it takes up half of your words. The kind of repetition you have in the last stanza is very good, and works very well, but it can be overused sometimes. Other than that, I think this was very good- very sweet words and nice use of language.

-Coral-

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

actually when i wrote this poem i remembered the movie "You Changed My Life"....which is the movie i used as an inspiration to this poem

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank for all the reviews:)

[Trevor]

This is more straightforward than most of the poetry on this site...most poetry in general, I suppose. In my book, that's the best kind of poem. Kudos

[Closedown]

Aww, it's sweet! Very gracefully done too. I like it a lot!

[deeps]

This is such amazing write here, overflowing with grace!

[luciddreamer]

a missing piece sometimes makes us feel full, for awhile. If that feeling comes from hate, we already know as a collected as well as connected human race, that we will destroy not only ourselves, but everyone around us. And, I like to think, if we combine love and a willingness to continue to work on our own humanity, we have at least found a key....Just my opinion...
Your write is beautiful, and I see my own long lost love in your words...thank you for sharing :)
Peace
Robin

[Omar Fendri]

you have a special way of writing
i love it :)