A Diamond Love

A Diamond Love

A Poem by Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Diamonds are forever

Like your love that is eternal

Diamonds sparkle

Like your love that is true


Diamonds are women’s best friend

Like your love that captivates every woman

Diamonds are expensive

Like your love that cannot easily bought.

 

© 2010 Jas Alejandrino Ramos


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Awww in my case diamonds are not my bestfriend they are stupid I believe that our bestfriends should know us be ours :) p.s great!!!!:)


~abbie!
100/100


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautifully written

Dalebear

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beauty pure beauty. Nice job this is a lovely write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The first line immedietly reminded me of a jewellery commercial that i've seen before but it's written nicely.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not bad. I liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Not bad...Keep going at it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Before you ask me to review something of yours you need to read the first little bit of my profile, which explains, in detail, my policy on reviewing the work of others.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You cannot earn love by buying everything...that's the number one rule about love: you cannot buy love. Yes, love is a very difficult emotion to go through and begin to handle...and the image of diamonds kept appearing in my head, i loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... that last line really did.. Nice poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Candid and real... a bit superficial im thinking, but maybe there is just a need for going a bit deeper in the feelings...?...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 12, 2010
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Tags: jhaszachery, love poems, poetry, in-love

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Jas Alejandrino Ramos
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Pampanga, Philippines



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I am a Bachelor of Arts in Communication graduate who loves to write poems and novels...I have also a passion for interior designing. more..

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