La Femme ( The Woman )

The woman, the woman that I always think off

The woman that makes my heartbeat runs fast

Faster than I ever expected

That I can’t even stop it,

Stop it from falling in love with the woman

 

Can’t even imagine how lucky am I,

Lucky to see her beautiful face,

Face that can launch a thousand ships,

Ship that I and the woman dreamed off to sail with

 

The woman that I dreamed off to be with,

To be with her forever,

Forever that is just a fantasy to come true,

A fantasy that the woman can bring to life.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Very good write

Dalebear

[Aven]

I loved the first part of this poem, it felt almost as a rap. I liked the idea behind it, and that you draw on Helen of troy. You could have ended stronger, would have left a greater impression on me. Overall, nice work!

[Hello, Goodbye]

Very good write.. i have experience your every word, and you have displayed the feelings well..

[Closedown]

One little, tiny question: why is the title in French and the rest in English? I mostly expected in poem in French, which I would have really liked. Nice poem otherwise