Love of Mine

I have this love of mine
Love of mine that I kept inside
Inside of a weary heart

That love of mine is like a rose
A rose that is so beautiful
And as lovely as it blooms

Like a ray of sun that brightens my day
For she is my sunshine
A sunshine that awakes my weary heart
And turns it into a romantic heart

And she will always be in my heart
My heart that she changed into something new
And passionate, like two kissing birds
For she is my love of mine.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This is a warm filling poem, love poems are so charmful beautiful written to.

Well done

[LynLee]

simple and elegant.....like the flow my favorite was the one about the rose! love roses!

[Lilly]

This is lovely - I like the second last line best: "And passionate, like two kissing birds"

[Adelia Alighieri]

I like it simple. :) Holds a charm.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Stillness-Of-Angel thank you for the nice review:)

[Omar Fendri]

simple, clear, straightforward and pure :) nice, keep working on :) i worship it

[deeps]

This is wonderful, very well written.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Clear in its meaning, resolute in its purpose. Job well done..

[the_stoic]

simple words woven artistically to touch the reader's heart .. nicely done