Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Jas Alejandrino Ramos
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Are you a Diana? "Every girl deserves to be treated like a princess"

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“I don’t know how to put this, every time I saw her face I feel suddenly inspired. The spark on her eyes are like shooting stars, make my wish come true and her smile is contagious, makes me want to smile even on a bad day. "

"But when I saw her with someone else, I feel the pain that stuck in my brain. I feel all the emotions running through my vain. Broken and can’t move on. Tears stream down my face. "

"But when I saw the tears on her eyes, it felt like snow in summer wish that I could give her my sweater. The sufferings she had that keeps on coming back and going in circles. And now I feel torn, so torn for her. I need her, the muse that I seek in every masterpiece I dream. And she needs someone to share her miseries and tell her that she is loved."

"But she has built boundaries that I don’t know if whether the rope that I created towards her is still worth climbing for or should I just cut it off. Even in all the confusion, I still love her for she is DIANA.” (while Zayn is painting something on a big portrait)

read it on Wattpad:

http://www.wattpad.com/50919084-diana



© 2014 Jas Alejandrino Ramos


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Intriguing prologue here. Of course longer writing is a hard sell, this really is the "poetry cafe' for whatever reason and getting people to jump to another site to continue is even more difficult but this does what a prologue should do. it makes the reader curious. Its well crafted and succinct and poses all types of questions. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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Intriguing prologue here. Of course longer writing is a hard sell, this really is the "poetry cafe' for whatever reason and getting people to jump to another site to continue is even more difficult but this does what a prologue should do. it makes the reader curious. Its well crafted and succinct and poses all types of questions. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very touching poem and poignantly felt as I read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A. Amos

10 Years Ago

Will do my friend...
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

10 Years Ago

Glad to hear from you my friend
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

We are here to support each other, so why not!
"But she has built boundaries that I don’t know if whether the rope that I created towards her is still worth climbing for or should I just cut it off. Even in all the confusion, I still love her for she is DIANA.”
I very good introduction. You gave enough to make the reader want to know more. I wanted to know more about Diana. Thank you for sharing the excellent introduction.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review :) i hope you continue reading it as i publish chapters

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Jas Alejandrino Ramos
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Pampanga, Philippines



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I am a Bachelor of Arts in Communication graduate who loves to write poems and novels...I have also a passion for interior designing. more..

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