Two and One

It's a bad comeback, I know. Not my best one :)

Two souls
Entwined together
One being
Together forever

Two hearts
Beating one rhythm
One instrument
Beautifully lissom

Two lips
Meeting halfway down
One passion
Skimming down her gown

Two shards
Of a forbidden love
One crystal
And the dead dove.

Author's Note

Please, honest reviews only :)

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is awesome J.I loved every line.Forbidden love does tend to pull us to the edge of reason.Two hearts merging into one is a very romantic notion goddaughter :)

[xDalliance]

Haha thank you, godmother! You know your every review means a lot to me! :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are always welcome it is my honest pleasure J :)

[KWP]

Love this ... I think it's my favourite of yours x x

[xDalliance]

Aww thank you!! I appreciate it a lot! :D

[Zahra]

it's very nice, short and expressive. Beautiful my friend

[xDalliance]

Haha thank you, dear neighbour :)

[Aethereal]

Yes, its strange how two conspire to be one. The first verse of your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you to keep as your own:

Love Birds

Far above the Nether‘,
two souls of a feather
join to fly together
over sea and heather
past inclement weather.

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! Your lines are so beautiful! :)