The Descendants

A fight between the Angel and the devil's kids.

The Descendants
Of the devil's wife
Beautiful faces
But the un-spared lives

Crying out blood
Wrecking havoc in a blur
"Descendants!" people called out
Running away in a moment's spur

Screeching voices
Their mother's approval
They descended below
No chance of retrieval

The proud father
The gloating mother
The Descendents won
Went away to saunter

The chance was out
She leaped agile
Angel that she was
Never looked more fragile

The Descendents laughed
Their parents waited apart
The Angel seized the chance
And performed her part

The Descendants lay
The origins still unbelieving
The Angel arched the last bow
Now, the only one living.

Author's Note

Honest reviews needed. Criticize it to the most! :)

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I loved the poem, brilliantly written.

Kaze~ :-)

[xDalliance]

Thank you Kaze! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :-)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sound's like one's that follow the devil the Selfishness
of the flesh do for them an not for god or others they just want to cause hurt and Havoc.

interesting twist. blessings




The Descendants
Of the devil's wife
Beautiful faces
But the un-spared lives

Crying out blood
Wrecking havoc in a blur
"Descendants!" people called out
Running away in a moment's spur

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Avery nice poem J.I really enjoyed it :)

[xDalliance]

Thank you Vi! I've got to say I really like my new nickname! :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes I am your fairy godmother I changed your name lol.You are very welcome .:)

[xDalliance]

Hahaha I'd love to keep you as my fairy godmother! What other magic will you do for me? :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

That sadly is all they gave me .The power to change names into one letter lol

[xDalliance]

Awww. I was hoping for some fairy dust :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah me too lol

[Simran Kewlani]

This is so clear. The way you have described this whole scene, I loved it. (:
Keep it up, the whole poem is really good.

[xDalliance]

Thank you simran! You're always one to encourage! :)

[Simran Kewlani]

It's my pleasure. (:

[Saddam]

The proud father
The gloating mother
The Descendents won
Went away to saunter.

This is very nice one. Great read dear. Well crafted and words are placed at right. Love to read.

[xDalliance]

Thank you Saddam! You always appreciate my poems! :)

[KittyVenus]

Beauty wrapped sweetly into a gorgeous poem with meaning spread like chocolate dripping onto a floor of fire and burning wisdom! Well done Jharna!!! Brilliant writing all the way!
XD XD XD XD XD XD
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

[xDalliance]

Hahaha and your review is like the silver threads of sweet compliments that weave into my soul and warm it! Thank you Kitty I appreciate your kind words! :)

[KittyVenus]

You're very welcome! i love your writing!

[xDalliance]

And I love yours! :)

[KittyVenus]

Thanks!!! XD

[xDalliance]

You're always welcome :)