I Have A Voice

I have a voice
And its strong
I'll season it with determination
And face everything that's wrong

I have a voice
And its loud
It will reverberate beneath your skin
And blow away the lies that mounds

I have a voice
And it's crystal clear
I'll make my opinions known
Though they don't ought to be sheer

I have a voice
And it's damn my choice
To speak, to scream or remain silent
Or to spit fire and thaw the ice.

Author's Note

Honest reviews needed! :) Criticize it to the most.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Here in starting "ITS STRONG" replace with "IT'S STRONG"
In the IInd stanza, "ITS LOUD" replace with "IT'S LOUD"

I hope, you won't spit fire on me that I've founded some errors in your write. lol

Keep penning, I liked the attitude. Stay with your this firey attitude.

[xDalliance]

Hahaha it's fine. I really want people to give me honest reviews and correct any mistake. I'll revise it! Thank you so much for the kind words! :)

[Stephen]

Thank God, you didn't spit some fire on me cause if you'd have done then am worried ...I'd have on fire! Lol

Anyway, it's all my pleasure!

[BlackRose]

LOVE this very much so. Projecting in this brilliant, clever art like piece. It's out of the box so to speak like many of my poetry. If only I had written it. To get praised review like this should be an honor. I know it is and thrilled when I get one similar to what I said here. :o)

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[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! Your review means a lot! I think I'll take it as an compliment I guess? ;)

[BlackRose]

Sweetie it SURE is. Something to be ecstatic about. Sooo very welcome. My pleasure. :o)

read moreSweetie it SURE is. Something to be ecstatic about. Sooo very welcome. My pleasure. :o)

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[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Brilliant write, nicely written. :-D

Kaze~

[xDalliance]

Thanks Kaze! Your reviews mean a lot! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Awwww, all good! :-D

[Simran Kewlani]

I love it. It's such a strong poem. Speaks for itself. Keep it up. (:

[xDalliance]

Thanks simran! I know I can always count on you to get inspirations from your poems! ;)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Love it So much strength and very
determined and a strong mind
when we fail get back up and
try try again, I rely on God so I
don't fail seems the LORD has given you
much courage and strengths always
be thankful of that this is Awesome.

I love these Lines. keep up the good work
Blessings.



I have a voice
And its strong
I'll season it with determination
And face everything that's wrong

I have a voice
And its loud
It will reverberate beneath your skin
And blow away the lies that mounds

[xDalliance]

Thank you dear, you always say good things about my poems! I'm glad to get your blessings :)

[KWP]

I like this very much - you are obviously a strong minded soul :)
The only suggestion I would offer is to think about your word choices such as 'And' .. this word is Ok sometimes but you seem to be relying on it in this poem and it is such a 'non' word here, offers no imagery or light just a stark repetition. Get in the habit of reading it over a few times then new ideas will pop into your head as to how you can alter and make improvements.

Not sure why you say you cannot write in you bio - this is very good :) xx

[xDalliance]

Thank you! I appreciate the advice! I'll surely try it next time! Criticism of my work is what will make me better! Will be awaiting your reviews! :D.

[T.H. Dalton]

Love it, you done a good job.

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! Glad you liked my work :)

[Saddam]

I have a voice
And it's damn my choice
To speak, to scream or remain silent
Or to spit fire and thaw the ice.

Great voice. It is needed too. Your voice must be heared by everyone. Great read dear.

[xDalliance]

Thank you! Means a lot! :D

[KittyVenus]

Hi, Jharna! I like this poem, its very descriptive and from the heart. XD XD XD