The Killer _ Part 2

Escape, I need an escape
From the walls closing on me
From the guilt chewing on me

Rescue, I need someone to rescue me
From the demons that stir inside me
From the frustration building inside me

Run, I need to run away
From the voices that encourage me
From the cold heartedness that can capture me

Death, I need death to come to me
To take away this torture in me
To take away my soul which has been tainted by me.

Author's Note

Honest reviews needed :) Criticize it to the fullest.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the direct and honest emotion. I like the need to escape, run and find death. A wild ride in the poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[xDalliance]

I've never received such good reviews! Thank you coyote you've liked all my poems! :)