Lunacy

I take measured steps towards her
Her soft skin and body invite me towards her
Alarming eyes and expressive features are all I see
There is nothing to calm my ecstasy

She backs away from me
Recognition and fear cross her features lovely
I put on my best smile to assure her security
Though she doesn't relax her eyes close heavily

I try to give off the aura of goodness
Practice, this was, to hide that intensity of willingness
Caressing her cheek I breathe in her scent
But irritation flares when she pushes me away, intentions of her safety meant

I bound her hands and feet
Tape her mouth and lips, which I will later kiss
She struggles wildly underneath me
But the gleam of the knife makes her think rationally

I feel a streak of satisfaction as I touch her
It grows as she doesn't flinch to my thoughts of erotica towards her
She squeezes her eyes as my hands feel her satin skin
My restlessness grows as I feel her in

She pleads with her eyes as I take her there
Wait till she stops her vain attempts
I make bloody designs on her with my trustworthy knife
Finally burying her with my secrets tonight.

Author's Note

Please, only honest reviews needed :)

Reviews

[Beth]

Wow...that was indeed something that made me think twice. Wonderful way you conveyed it Jharna. Great!

[xDalliance]

Thank you so very much Beth! Means a lot to me! :)

[Frieda P]

Oh my, darkly sinister and haunting, I may never sleep again....great, albeit scary as fook story within, excellent read. ;-)

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much Frieda! Haha I never knew my words had such an effect! Glad you liked it! :)

[Frieda P]

Expect a call from me at 3 AM Jharna! ;-) My pleasure....

[xDalliance]

Hahaha. But I doubt with the time difference you'll also be able to scare me! :P

[Frieda P]

I'll be sleeping or trying to anywho, with mace and every light on! ;-P

[xDalliance]

Hehehe! I'll give you company. I'm still figuring out how I wrote this poem when I'm afraid of even a little dark. Ironic I think! :p

[Frieda P]

Sometimes when we write about what we fear most, it takes the sting out of it, a little bit...hopefully anyway...

[xDalliance]

Hehe yes I think! It helps! :)

[Frieda P]

Now I'm afraid what you'll write next. ;-) haha

[xDalliance]

Haha I'll try to write something good. Not something that'll scare you :P

[Frieda P]

That's nice....usually what I do too, go from dark to light and back again, we don't wanna scare anyone, oh wait, you already did that!

[xDalliance]

Hahaha yeah I guess! But hey, my recent poems are not scary! They're pretty normal. I think. :P

[Zahra]

Frightening twist, nicely written.

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! :)

[Zahra]

My pleasure! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A dark and frightening poem. You set-up the story in the poem leading to the scary ending. You create a a complete tale in so few words. That take talent. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[xDalliance]

Thanks again coyote! These compliments mean a lot to me! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love the darkness that's in this poem. nicely written. :-D

Kaze~

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much Kaze! :D

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Such darkness in this poem Jharna.I will never understand why some men need to be this way :)

[xDalliance]

True. My thoughts were similar when I wrote this poem!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well really well written :)

[xDalliance]

Thank you! :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Welcome hunny :)

[Matthew Bosko]

The imagery is so raw and vivid. Its almost like the person we are getting the information from is so in lust with this woman that he needs to control her in every aspect.

nicely done

[xDalliance]

Thank you very much! Glad you got the central idea of the poem :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Your descriptions are amazing. There is something in your poems that pulls people's attention towards you. They are like a magnet, they put the people to think about the story and the feelings you had behind the poem. Amazing work. Well done. (:

[xDalliance]

Thank you so very much simran! Your reviews really help! :)

[Simran Kewlani]

You're welcome. Thank you for the compliment.