The Mist Of Ignorance

This is a similar poem to Delusion.

Mist surrounds me as I sleep
Fleeting memories of someone peeking beneath
Straining closer I try to discern
Whose face it is who is tugging at my yearn.

I panic as the mist turns thicker
The faint face almost disappears
I try to walk and push my way out
But there's no direction or end to my personal torture.

Suddenly a sliver of mist shifts aside
I seize the opportunity and inside I slide
I search around in the translucent white
My heart stutters as I finally catch your sight.

Suddenly I wake up shivering
The dream was wrong on so many footings
Recognition had blossomed on his sight
But he was not the one whom i had envisioned myself holding tight.

Author's Note

Reviews needed :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a very good writer. Because of the Writer's Cafe. I learn best new writers are from India. You speak many languages and understand words.
"Recognition had blossomed on his sight
But he was not the one whom i had envisioned myself holding tight."
The above lines is amazing. Sometime we land in the wrong place sometimes. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment! This kind of a compliment means a whole lot of things for me! I couldn't be happier now! Thanks again! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Please send me read requests. I work a lot. I get to ASAP.

[Stephen]

Not a bad shot. Concept's good, it's came from your real life experiences foresure. The way to express your feelings through words's nicely captured in "The Mist Of Ignorance."

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! I've still to learn a lot from others. Your compliment means a lot! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

not into torture. but this was different very free verse and good flow to It. blessings

[xDalliance]

Thank you so much! :)

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

I like this, alot, keep up the good work, i'm a fan.

[xDalliance]

Haha thank you so much! Although I don't think my poems are so good as to get fans! :P

[Simran Kewlani]

The last verse gave a twist to the poem. At the beginning of the poem it felt like you were describing how broken you were because of love. But then, the last verse was an amazing twist. The conclusion to this poem has ended really smoothly.

[xDalliance]

Thank you again Simran :) means a lot!