Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by xDalliance

Eyes have their own language
Expressing their views even when lips do not
They blink and churn the pretty colour of the irises
Betraying our emotions against our will as it turns out,

They close and trigger us with the memories
They relay their views with what they have seen
Send us messages with what's thats true
And contradict it with what we want to be true,

They can look into someone's soul right through
Or provide others a window into ours
They're truthful even though you're not
Pushing away the heap of lies you've built up

Then when they close
Finally to rest their work galore
The truths they held and the lies they cleared
All disolve up as they leave the holder.

© 2014 xDalliance


Author's Note

xDalliance
Will be glad to get reviews :)

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Beautifully said I love it.

the eye's can say something words
cannot but the heart can see what
the human eye's can't if God allows
us to see it and understand it.

beautiful lines here.

"Expressing their views even when lips do not".

Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


I will tell you now I am an honest reviewer - i do not cover up with fluff very well - i think your poems are excellent, especially considering your age - WOW - very intuitive writing, you have the ideas now it is just a matter of making the words dance a little more.

I am very very impressed well done xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! This coming from someone whose work I adore! I try to have a bit more description.. read more
This is so good J .I absolutely love it and the words are so true :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Vidya! Means a lottt coming from you! :D
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
"Expressing their views even when lips do not". This line is amazing. It is so true. We require courage to go speak up, but when we're unable to speak it up.Amazing. Keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Simran! Your reviews are always helpful!

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