Promises

Promises

A Story by xDalliance

I never promised you a ray of light
When you plunged into darkness that night
In your heart, hear me right
I only promised to hold you tight
I never promised you a beautiful song
When you heard those mean and abusive sounds
In your mind, hear me right
I only promised to hold you tight

You never promised me a future, let alone bright
When I'd said that I wanted you mine
In my soul,  hear me right
You only promised to never be mine..

© 2014 xDalliance


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xDalliance
Will be glad to get reviews :)

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So typical of creating things in our minds, overanalyzing what is really going on.

Like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thank you ;)
Amazing. You have described love so beautifully. The need for love reflects in the poem really beautifully. Keep it up. I'm looking forward to see some more amazing pieces. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so very nice.People need to accept each other for who they are and not who they want them to be :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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