Opinions

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She is beautiful, said yellow

No, she isn't,  said grey

That is my opinion, said she

She is not, think what you may

God is great, said the lion

God is unfair, said the beast

I'm skeptical, said the human

There is no God, said the atheist

Crocodile is cruel, said Monkey

He took a rabbit's life

Crocodile saves the family

Said Crocodile's wife

Women are stronger, said the housewife

Men don't bear a child

Men are stronger, said the chieftain

They toil in the wild.

Author's Note

Please feel free to say what you have to :)

Reviews

[Sioranth Smith]

This is such a pretty piece of poetry and I love the contrasting viewpoints. It's a really imaginative way of interpreting the "two sides to every story" (and sometimes three or four or five!). I think you could probably improve a little bit on the meter (if that's something you care about :) ) with a few simple rewrites, but the rhyming is very nice.

[Jhanvi YJ]

Thank you so much. I will work on what you said. I really appreciate it :)

[zainul]

I smile and feel that it's a great write.

[Jhanvi YJ]

Thank you :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,intelligent poet.:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

the poem has a flow and a rhythm of its own, your imagination would lead to greater kind of poetry, well done.
all the best, sayed thangal

[Jhanvi YJ]

Thank you :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

I belong to Kerala, I also posted some poems in this site, see and share your views.
thans

[Penny]

Wat a sweet little poem.. i just cant get enough of it.

[Jhanvi YJ]

Thank you so much! :)

[Penny]

Welcome...

[Trace]

it's the give and take of life. Well done. Trace

[Jhanvi YJ]

Thank you so much! :)