Prologue: Ready

Written 10/16/10.

"  I love you."

Those vicious words - they pierced her very being and cut down inside of her.  But there was nothing that she could do about it.  It was too hard to resist.  She couldn't stop herself, but she knew, deep down inside, she wanted to. 

Could she?

♥

"It's gonna be a hard week for you."

"Oh well."

Sighing and rolling her eyes, sixteen-year-old Anna Black turned and left her brother behind as she exited the door.  It was her first day of eleventh grade, in a new school, and she wasn't exactly what you'd call "happy" about it.  She had only been here once before, on that crazy night of the week where you're allowed to visit the school, an "open house."  And that's what it was - it was a huge, crowded school, most likely with tons of s****y popular girls and jocks.

Jocks.

Sighing dreamily to herself, Anna walked towards her car quickly and got in the front seat.  She'd be driving herself today, as she would usually do, but hoped that nothing bad would happen.

And then... it did.

Author's Note

Comment please.

Reviews

[Rayne~Drop.]

Finally found time to read this! Love how you did the first paragraph. Really well written. The way you grouped the people at open house into s****y girls and jocks was funny. XD Sounds interesting, so reading on. ^.^

[r]

Jocks! I like the "sighing dreamily" part, 'cause it seems very teenage-girl-like, or whatever. But anyway! This is well written. It draws in the reader and makes them wonder who Anna is, and want to know what's going to happen, where it's going to lead. I LOVE the way you have her wishing nothing bad will happen, and then have the last line the way it is. I'm definitely going to keep reading!

[The Cute 1]

this is good

[Laura]

Thats really good. There is the question what is going to happen to her which grips the reader and makes them want to read on. Can't wait till you get more on her. A great start :)

[master squiggles]

Like said, this sounds very interesting. This was very cool and left me wondering what would happen to her - I want to see what happens, so please update soon! It also sounds like a good start. Please continue!