My heart

My heart

A Poem by Donald Olds

My Heart

By: The Jeztr

If i gave you my heart would you take it and guard it with your life?

Or would you just break it and throw it away?

I will give you my heart only if you promist to love me.

Yes I love you, that was never the question.

You've played me before and broke my heart.

I'm not willing to go through that again.

© 2009 Donald Olds


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Aww.. Jeez. That's sweet but sad. THe uncertainty of putting your heart in the hands of another, who's wronged you before. It's very powerful. Short and to the point. Very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on April 21, 2009