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A Story by Donald Olds
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Jeztr

How could I have been so Blind,

I've been looking for love for so many years.

How could I have been too blind to not

see you staring at me?

I left you for what I thought was Love,

but turned out to be just another heart that's been

borken and waiting to be healed.

I beged for you to come back to me,

and finally you decided to give me another chance.

I was blinded by the darkness that surrounded

me when you were gone.

But now that you're back you have given me back the light and love I need.

I've sorry for leaving you in the first place

I regret doing that because now our love will never

be the same.

I disrespected you so many different times

I never meant to be hurtfull.

My guilt is like broken glass in your foot,

Leaving scars that will always be there. Reminding

you of what you want to forget.

I love you with all of my heart.

I don't know what I was thinking when I left you.

But now I'm where I belong, and that's where I'll stay.

© 2008 Donald Olds


Author's Note

Donald Olds
There's a lot of grammar problems because I was in a hurry. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! I wrote this when My girlfriend and I broke up after a year of going steady.

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so much emotion i love all of your poems :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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