The Universe Within

Whoa there, Nelly, this one's a doozie. I like it though, cuz it goes deep and wide. Makes me smile.

Inside my body....

down electrical pulse

 nanobot horses

take on their own force

so articulate winding

their way down the swole

particulates running

as life takes its toll

    revealing the depth

inside the arena

of a micron of life

And we've never seen a

more beautiful sight

magnified brilliance

when you turn on the light

it finally makes sense.

Any life

Any force

Any view,

rich or coarse

Anatomy within

is beauty endorsed.

Often unnoticed

inside of life's duty

 But nevertheless,

beauty is beauty!

Its presence resides

in whole worlds of nil size

The deeper you go,

the more you realize

the visions,

the art,

the poetical spines,

did you happen to notice

Genetical lines?

Rhetorical whines,

Phonetical fines,

Sympatico signs...

Its all in there

inside the inside

where microns collide

into vapor bursts ride.

Atomic cells

 in nucleus uprsing...

intertwined upon waves

of the smallest in sizing.

Notice how protein

 is philosophising.

Solventing sugars

 and spices of being

I couldn't fathom

 the greatness I'm seeing

the further I went

the more I had been

all in a nutshell

amazing like zen.

Just a spark of real time

 a moment of history

  embodied in rhyme

that only God sees...

Its coolants and acids

and catalysts flowing

involving my flesh

in their own unique roaming

teaching the owner

to be this or that 

counteract one 

and you could become fat!

Follow up wishing

with gazing at stars 

honeycombed tasors  

buried under old scars

and so much inside

the deeper it goes

following further til LOOK OUT

it blows!

 Could that be angst?

or fiery passion?

look anatomicly

 at its reaction.

Seeing how sweets

transpose more heat

heart couldn't feel

 what the heart meant to beat

taking me down

to the doghouse we go

Simple carbs could have helped here ya know,

while many a dinner, 

many a fight

many a chemical

reaction each night

formed simple new mixtures

strange combined fluids

roaming the bloodstream 

raising the bids

to our vast open thoughts

like a miniscule master

puppet of dots

swirling life faster...

pulling our strings

pushing those buttons

killing ones fears 

or creating gluttons...

the breakdowns at work

carried out in the juices

biometrically spiritual

life blood it induces

carnality wrapped

in a finite flesh layer

of cellualar heights

pumping in all that air.

 

Minding our hopes

and causing our fights.

Dont even go there

you'll be up at nights...

 

indigestion at play

it only gets spattered

while kindness is olive oil

deeply battered

hate is a mold spore

whose ego is shattered

did I mention how peace

is vitamins scattered?

 

Freedom is feng shui

set up 'just so'

Slavery stems

from heartache and woe

 

Honesty churns out

like buttercream top

Deceptiveness makes it

so sickness forgot

 

Sexyness carves

itself out of water

begging to become

our mother and daughter...

 

Nothing at large escapes the within

Cravings and attitudes live there and then

the good and the bad, sainthood and sin

swirl in a mix with tonic and gin...

 

Streaming over and over

the path like a polish

Each life will out shine 

if you fine tune the smallish.

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[JewelsGold]

This is a recent sort of "rant" off my blog that I wrote about a year ago.
I would like to fine tune it a bit and make it flow a little better, but overall, I think I really enjoy where the concept is going in this poem.
I might do a new rendition of it and submit later.