Don't Go

"The feeling of having someone you love leave you"

It hurts my heart to let you go

But I can't hold on any longer.

My mind and body have corrupted your happiness

That is what I know.

 

I never wanted this.

 

How can I never speak your name again

Or rid you from my mind?

How can I be happy

Knowing your not mine?

 

I never wanted this.

 

You promised me to be there always

Now you've up't and left.

How can I express the hurt I feel

In my abandonment?

 

I never wanted this.

 

To feel the warmth of your embrace

To feel your lips graze my skin

Would be like a touch of grace

But cocaine that I could not have again.

 

I never wanted this.

 

I know in my heart this is better

To let you go in peace.

But my body screams for you

As I sit and contemplate.

 

I never wanted this.

 

Just please don't go and sell your soul

I know whats on your mind.

I know you better then you think

Even though your surely, not mine.

 

I never wanted this.....

......I never wanted this

I never wanted this!

 

Reviews

[larryb]

Well written and flows well, i can feel the pain in your voice kudos to you hon :)

[Michael X]

passionate and convincing, the readercant help but feel the tragic love deepening into sorrow.
Nicely painted prose

[Captain Ugly]

Interesting piece. I like how the last set of repetitions comes of like a frantic tantrum. Really sews it up well.

Just Me.
Captain Ugly.