Be Free

"There is always a chance for us all"

A feeling of hopelessness runs through your veins

And you cannot escape it, you cannot refrain

Your soul it is tortured with feelings , with thoughts

But you're trying to stop it, but trying for naught.

 

You've lost this one battle

It's washed your soul clean

Your mind starts to wander and

starts to glean.

You look to the sky and gaze at the stars

Completely enthralled and entranced by how far.

 

Wishing for freedom , wishing for hope

Trying so hard -  just to cope

You want to be happy and feel something worthwhile

But you can't rid the vanity

that's been there awhile.

 

Closing your eyes you feel anger rise

As the memories hit you and you

feel no surprise.

Those moments when people

used and abused you

Those times that you wish

You could lose too.

 

It's really not fair

You have had your share

But be strong my friend

There is an end :

To the misery and slithery

To the hurt and the pain

To the people who've wounded your heart -

their to blame.

Just hold in there

I promise a time there will be

When all of your problems will decease and

you can be free.

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

how lovely this all is..
hopeless you feel..so let down..you could never run ..no where to go..tortured all the time..thoughts nags at you
you lose time and time..you start to wonder..where did i go wrong ..and you know all the while..its not you at fault
they will never let you be..its not fair..its life..it has never been fair or just
but you look high up to heaven and rejoice the splendour you see..the lovely sky ..lovely scene
those stars are so high..so far so bright..flashing to your face in a dark night..and you wonder
with all this splendour ..how could be so much hurt ..so much pain
and you wonder where is happiness ..why i have to suffer all time
and you close your eyes and feel the beauty inside..but with it all the anger at what is not right
its not fair..just be strong ..hang on there..things will change
and you will be free again..i surely hope ..i would like to see that hope..i could never see
am i losing sight!!!
lovely write

[Butterflymom]

Jewels, this was so beautifully done. It is a very powerful, intense, and heart felt piece.