Of Earth and Of Heaven

Dance with me along the horizon

Lose yourself on the sunset's edge

Stand gazing with me on the clouds

Searching for glimpses of Heaven

Reviews

[Odrah]

This is very sweet. I'm a fan of horizon imagery and you've used it very well. This poem is brimming full, and might I even suggest overflowing, with joy. There is wonder to be found in everything and here it is very simply and strongly stated.

This plucked at some of the string of my heart and certainly made me smile.

Well done.

[☮]

Well that's what we do every day, right? Get as much living in as possible before the end of days, looking for glimpses of heaven until we get there. I like this. Short, but full of interpretation. Nice work.

[CLUTZ]

pretty. i like it.